Story Premise in a Commercial

A great little story here … a surfer is distracted by a baby surfing near him and from this distraction falls off his board when he is catching a wave and briefly loses consciousness and wakes up being pulled from the water on a beach … rescued by babies in a special land where babies can all surf and are kept young by a miraculous potion obtained in a plastic bottle from the “fountain of youth” little surf shack on the beach … the neon sign in the shack at the end reinforces the message. There have been many screenplays turned into films from a lot less dramatic premise.


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